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Absolutely! Staying mindful of your body's condition and practicing proper warmups can greatly reduce the risk of injury. Also, listening to your body's signals is key to maintaining overall health and enjoying sports safely.
Here’s a corrected and improved version of your sentence:
"Yes, you're right. I would pay more attention to my physical health when doing sports."
Tips for improvement:
1. "Take care more about" → "Pay more attention to" (more natural phrasing)
2. "Body healthy" → "Physical health" (correct collocation)
3. "When doing some sports" → "When doing sports" (more concise; "some" is unnecessary here)
Alternative phrasing (if you want a slightly different tone):
- "You're right—I should be more mindful of my health when exercising."
- "Yes, I agree. I’d focus more on my well-being while playing sports."
Keep it clear and natural—good job overall, just a few small adjustments needed. 😊 (Word count: 100)

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