I'm sorry to hear that. Safety is crucial, and it's important to pay attention to proper techniques and equipment. Let's always ensure we're following the safety rules to prevent such accidents and keep enjoying the game safely....
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I'm sorry to hear that. Safety is crucial, and it's important to pay attention to proper techniques and equipment. Let's always ensure we're following the safety rules to prevent such accidents and keep enjoying the game safely.
Here’s a corrected and improved version of your sentence:
"That's a great idea. However, I found some bad news online about someone getting hurt while playing."
Tips for improvement:
1. "It is" → "That's" – More natural in spoken English.
2. "great idea" (missing article) → "a great idea"
3. "from network" → "online" – More natural than "from network."
4. "someone was hurt" → "someone getting hurt" – "Getting hurt" flows better in this context.
5. "when playing" → "while playing" – Slightly more natural phrasing.
Additional Tip:
If you want to make it smoother, you could say:
"That's a great idea, but I saw some worrying news online about someone being injured while playing."
(Word count: 120)
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