Well, that could be useful in some situations. For example, if you're traveling on a long journey or in areas with poor cellular coverage, having a Wi - Fi link can be great. But it might not always be practical everywhere. What do you think? Do you have any other ideas for introducing news like this?
Here’s a corrected and improved version of your sentence:
"I’ve heard some news I’d like to share—apparently, certain celebrities are offering Wi-Fi links. Is that useful?"
Tips for improvement:
1. Grammar & Spelling:
- "Ive" → "I’ve" (apostrophe for "I have")
- "to introduce" → "I’d like to share" (more natural phrasing)
- "just like the specific stars" → "certain celebrities" (clearer and more natural)
- "they can offer the Wifi link" → "are offering Wi-Fi links" (better verb tense & capitalization)
2. Clarity & Flow:
- Your original sentence was a bit disjointed. The improved version connects ideas smoothly.
- "Is that useful?" is fine, but you could also ask:
- "Do you think that’s useful?" (more conversational)
- "Would that be helpful?" (if referring to practical use)
Keep practicing short, clear sentences—your English is understandable, and with small adjustments, it will